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Scriptural Trimerics

Posted by Jenny on Feb 8, 2014 in Snippets

Some time ago I confessed to you that I’m not really a poet. Poetry is something that has in the past surprised me usually at times of great emotion. Since then, I’ve found myself writing more and enjoying the form. Yes, I guess I’m a bit like a blindfolded child trying to pin the tail on the donkey. I don’t know all the terms, patterns and forms. I don’t always get the rhyme or metre right – but its fun and there are new forms like free verse and somehow it allows me to express things I otherwise might not have said.

Then along came The Month of Poetry (MoP) . The challenge of MoP is to write one poem a day in the month of January. I was a little tempted – but really, one poem a day! But my friends Michelle and Nola said, “Go on, you can do it.” So I signed up. And I have had an absolute ball – both writing poetry, learning new forms, reading my fellow MoPettes poems, and receiving feedback.

I’m planning on signing up next January.

All of this is a long winded way to say – I am going to have to confess to being a poet. Maybe not an accomplished one, or a brilliant one – but a poet nonetheless.

I want to say a big thank you to Kat Apel – moderator and instigator of MoP.  I also want to encourage you, my reader, if you have desire to tinker with poetry, don’t worry whether you have the skill or not – don’t hold back, just let go of the hidden poet.

One of the forms I learned from one of my fellow poets during MoP was the Trimeric invented by Dr Charles A Stone.  It’s a neat little form. I wanted to give it a go – and I was taken by a verse in Isaiah that resonated with me. The result was my first Scriptural Trimeric.

The Good Shepherd

He gently tends his flock
gathering little lambs in his arms
carries them close to his heart
shepherding those who have young.

Gathering little lambs in his arms
holding them tight and secure
our fears he softly calms.

Carries us close to his heart
hammering strong in rhythm of love
only prideful fears can push us apart.

Shepherding we who have young.
Scaling the depths of mother-father love
To his footsteps we have clung.

Based on Isa 40:11 NIV

© Jeanette O’Hagan 16 January 2014

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Michelle’s Excerpt Tour

Posted by Jenny on Dec 4, 2013 in Book Reviews

Debut author Michelle Dennis Evans gives us an exciting sneak peak at her YA contemporary novel Spiralling out of Control. Please welcome her.

Jenny, thank you so much for hosting me on your blog.

Make sure you read right to the bottom for your chance to win a $200 Amazon voucher.

Book blurb… Temptation, depression, seduction, betrayal … Not what Stephanie was expecting at fifteen years of age. Uprooted from her happy, all-girl high school life with a dream filled future and thrown into an unfriendly co-ed school, Stephanie spirals into depression. When charismatic high school senior, Jason notices her, Stephanie jumps in feet first and willingly puts all her faith and trust in him, a boy she barely knows. Every choice she makes and turn she takes leads her towards a dangerous path. Her best friend is never far away and ready to catch her … but will she push Tabbie too far away when she needs her most?

This novel contains adult themes. Recommended reading audiences 17+

Bio … Michelle Dennis Evans writes picture books, chapter books, young adult contemporary novels and enjoys dabbling in free verse poetry. Her debut novel Spiralling Out of Control and poetry collection Life Inspired both reached #1 in subcategories on Amazon in their first week of release. Michelle is passionate about seeing people grow and move forward in their journey. She lives on the Gold Coast with her husband and four super active, super fun and super time consuming children. Find Michelle and all of her social media links at MichelleDennisEvans.com

Book excerpt… Chapter 1 part b

A week later, her award-winning performance may as well have been a lifetime ago. She was sure their torturous drive from Sydney to Toowoomba would inflict post traumatic stress disorder. Stephanie’s sister, April, spoke after everyone in the car fell silent. “You nailed the solo last week.” “Yeah,” Stephanie said in a low voice, chewing a fingernail as she looked out the window. “But as if this stupid country town will have any good dance schools.” “I bet they’ll have a dance class at school.” April scratched a piece of cracked upholstery. “We’ll just have to wait and see.” Her mother faced the windscreen as she spoke. “We might have to check the cost first.” Her mother’s tone screwed with her heart. Dancing in competitions and being discovered now seemed as likely as getting hit by a meteorite. They arrived at the hotel after ten that night. Stephanie unclipped her seatbelt anticipating her escape from the confines of the family car. Her father stood at the locked office door talking on his mobile. A minute later he returned, shoving the phone into his pocket. “Blast!” He thrust open the car door and started the engine with a rev. The spinning tires sent a shower of loose gravel against the motel wall. Ping. Pang. The clatter alone would have woken the deepest sleeper. “What? John, what’s going on? Where are we going?” asked Stephanie’s mum. Her father drove off, red-faced and with his mouth clamped shut. “Diane, girls, this is it,” he said as he pulled into a driveway. “Our new home?” Diane said. John nodded as he climbed out of the car. “You’re not even sure of what our new home looks like?” Stephanie stared at her mother. “I’ve only seen pictures, you know that.” Her mother shook her head. “We don’t pick up the key until tomorrow.” Her father drew in a deep breath. “And it appears the whole of Toowoomba is booked up, including our room which they gave to someone else because we didn’t get here before closing hours. It’s rodeo season.” “What? That’s just not good enough.” Her mother’s voice bounced off the car windows. “Wasn’t there something you could’ve done?” “They gave our room to someone else. What did you want me to do? Go and tell them to get out?” Her father’s mouth formed a thin line. “One thing I do know … I can’t spend another minute in the car today. I’ll wait under the porch ’til morning. Try and get some sleep girls.”

From December 1 through December 16, the John 3:16 Marketing Network is hosting a Christmas Book Launch and Spiralling Out of Control is a featured book. As part of the event, the Network is offering a $200 Amazon gift certificate to one lucky winner. For a chance to win, go to and enter the Rafflecopter (toward the bottom of the page).

Michelle Dennis Evans xx Author

michelledennisevans.com

Joining the tour for the first time – you can find Michelle and a new excerpt each day at the following blogs:

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Through the Book Shelf – Discovering New Worlds

Posted by Jenny on Nov 29, 2013 in Snapshot

Let's talk about books and writing

Writing and painting are two passions I’ve dabbled in since I was a young child. In my twenties, I took up both my brush and the pen but soon other pursuits – marriage, career, children, ministry – crowed out my time and led me in a different direction.

Then a couple of years ago a chance conversation with the mother of my son’s best friend inspired me to enrol in a post-graduate writing degree at Swinburne.

What has followed has been an exciting voyage of discovery

I’ve taken up the pen again. It started with the first unit when I dusted off an old manuscript I’d written in the 80s & 90s – a YA Fantasy novel, Adelphi – and had a go at re-editing the first couple of chapters. Before I knew it, I was re-editing the whole book then writing the prequel – which soon turned into the Akrad’s Legacy Trilogy: Akrad’s Children, Rasel’s Song and Mannok’s Betrayal. In the last 22 months I’ve completed 3 unpublished manuscripts and am halfway through the fourth. It has been so much fun sharing adventures with my characters – their joys, tragedies and triumphs.

- I’ve learnt so much more writing craft. I already had a solid base to work from as an avid reader since Grade 3, majoring in rhetoric in my Arts degree, doing workshops and joining Queensland Writers Centre in the 90s. But the world of fiction-writing is fast moving and a number of things had changed. The last 22 months has been a learning adventure – the niceties of Point of View, Deep third person, speech and action tags and cutting those adverbs and weasel words. Learning the craft has sharpened my prose and given it a more modern twist.

- I’ve faced the publishing Mount Everest and kept on climbing. Getting published has never been easy – but in today’s world of struggling bookshops and publishers inundated with tens of thousands of manuscripts – it sometimes seems like winning the lottery. Moreover, publishers now expect authors not just to write and dream up new novels but to market and build a platform. One thing is for sure though; you can’t achieve a goal unless you actually try. So I’m writing, re-writing, sending manuscripts to publishers, entering competitions and keeping my options open.

- I’ve discovered a group of Aussie authors I knew nothing about. Through my course but also, in one of those God-incidents, when I connected with an about-to-be published author (I went to Bible College with her Dad), I went on a writers camp. Here I met both published and aspiring authors, publishers and editors, linked in with some writing groups through Facebook and began to contribute to some great group blogs. I have received so much encouragement and inspiration from these fantastic writers.

- I have read and enjoyed a whole bunch of books I knew nothing about. And I am sure that there are many, many people who are totally unaware of inspirational Aussie and Kiwi books available through publishing companies such as Even Before Publishing/Wombat Books, Splashdown Press or Daystar Publishing. I’ve found that Aussie authors are often more down to earth and willing to meld genres. If you haven’t already, it’s well worth a look at what is offer.

- I dabbled in some creative non-fiction and poetry. While fiction is my current focus, my course has given me opportunities to explore other areas. I continue to blog, write poems, reviews and social commentary. My current unit is on Writing History.  I have a number of areas that I want to write about including ethics, apologetics and family history – and one day I will .

Next week, on 6th December, Michelle Dennis Evans will be posting on Jenny’s Thread as part of an Excerpt Tour from her recent YA release – Spiralling Out of Control as well as giving the opportunity of winning $200 Amazon voucher.

Did you say "win"

Some authors I’ve met, read and grown to love their books:

Paula Vince – New Adult (NA) contemporary fiction with suspense, romance and creative take on difficult issues, e.g. Best Forgotten, Picking up the Pieces and her fantasy Quenarden series.

Lynne Stringer –YA Science Fiction Verindon series – The Heir, The Crown (The third book The Reign will be released early next year.)

Skye Elizabeth Wieland – adventure, faith and romance against the magnificent background of the Krueger National Park in Sarah’s Gift and newly released Mark’s Strength.

Amanda Deed – historical romantic fiction set at the time of the Victorian Gold Rushes.

Meredith Resce – long time author of historical inspirational romances set in England and Australia.

Rose Dee – her Resolution series are inspirational contemporary romances set in North Queensland – with elements of intrigue and suspense.

Paula, Rose, Amanda and Meredith collaborated in The Greenfield Legacy, tracing the impact on past decisions on family dynamics.

Michelle Dennis Evans – her hard hitting YA novel Spiralling Out of Control

Jo WanmerThough the Bud Be Bruised – gritty yet hopeful fictionalised account of abuse

Lisa Taylor – her YA book Motive Games

Ian Acherson – supernatural thriller Angelguard

Kayleen West – delightful picture books Without Me and Adoptive Father

Michelle Worthington – delightful Yellow Dress Day, Wonderfully Madison and other titles

Katrina Rowe – picture book Marty’s Nut Free Party

Carol Preston – Australian historical series from convict days – based on her own family history.

Paul Clark – modern day parables with the Car Park Parables

David Malcolm Bennett – Biographies and historical non-fiction (though I already knew David & had read his books back in Bible college Days ;) )

Sheridan VoyseyResurrection Year (Again, I knew Sheridan & Merryn from Bible college days.)

Other authors I’ve met online and/or in person whose books are on my to-read list:

Annie Hamilton – especially her fantasy books

Andrea Grigg – an Australian romance – A Simple Mistake

Elaine FraserA Perfect Mercy

Lisbeth Klein – children’s fantasy series

Penny Reeve – children’s books

Jo-Anne Berthelsen – novels and non-fiction Soul Friend

Ray Hawkins devotional books

Mary Hawkins inspirational romances

Jennifer AnnBroken Pottery the life of an African girl

Andrew Lansdown – award winning poetry

Graham AitchisonNo Way But Through a personal journey from mental illness to health

Melissa Gijsbers Teapot Tales and other anthologies.

And then there are the up and coming authors (watch this space):

Alison Steggert – writing YA adventure stories

Nicole Nugent – contemporary fiction about a nurse’s adventures in remote indigenous communities

Kristine Barrett – epic fantasy

Amanda – Australian historical fiction

Virginia Moncrieff – journalist & contemporary fiction

Dorothy Raymond

Charis Joy Jackson – fantasy

Vicki Stevens – contemporary mystery set in Australia

Trina Denner -  middle grade children’s book (for boys)

Adele Jones – about to be published Integrate

Nola Passamore – published poet, working on a novel

Julie-Anne O’Hagan – journalist, editor and writer

And (cough, cough) Jeanette O’Hagan – YA/NA fantasy

(My apologies if I’ve missed anyone.)

We have a lot of local talent – so let’s celebrate, enjoy and support our local home-grown authors.

“I alone cannot change the world, but I can cast a stone across the waters to create many ripples.” Mother Teresa

Photos by Jeanette O’Hagan (All rights reserved)

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Lighthouse

Posted by Jenny on Aug 6, 2013 in Snippets

For my very dear friend, Carol.

“He stilled the storm to a whisper; the waves of the sea were hushed.” Psalm 107:29 NIV  (see 23-32)

Lighthouse
By Jeanette O’Hagan

5 August 2013

Steady light in the dark, stormy maw of the night
obscured by driving rains or, perhaps, my own tear blurred sight -
Jesus, my Lord and God, you are the lighthouse of my life.
Giver of breath, love and meaning in the midst of human strife,
forgive me when I doubt you or, dreaming, wanting, scheming,
drift away from your shining beacon of light,
towards the sharp toothed rocks of my own devise.

Lord, be the storm anchor of my floundering ship,
the farsighted captain guiding me through life’s tempests,
past sharp rocks and submerged reefs of criticism and pain,
against the riptides of laziness and despair,
through cold, drenching waves of self doubt and fear.
Jesus, you are the steady rock, the lighthouse of my life,
your beacon glimmers through the darkness bright and clear.

You bring me safely into the haven of your embrace,
Tending, mending, you refurbish and strengthen
And drawing closer, you turn towards me your bright face
And whisper “My child, fear not for I am with you”
And your love shines forth echoing with wild joyous cheer
And though you send me out again on thrashing seas
Lighthouse of my life, I know I will always find sweet haven in thee.

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Fine Lines

Posted by Jenny on Mar 30, 2013 in Snippets

Fine Lines emerged out of reflecting on memory loss, family and faith – spurred on by the devotional verse I read this morning:

Fine Lines
By Jeanette O’Hagan
30 March 2013

Fine lines crisscross the map
In a tangled grid;
Pathways through the city’s maze
Lines in time and space
That situate the temporal place.

Fine lines adorn the beloved face
Marking passing years;
Deeper lines with time are etched
Tracing happiness and grief
Hostage to the memory thief.

Fine lines tangle in grey cells
Plaque builds up between
And neural pathways begins to fray
As memory fragments and fails
And confusion slowly entails.

Fine lines connect cross generations
In kaleidoscopic patterns
Love and fate entwine in cabled ply
Crossed lines and DNA signs
Link kin and kind in swirling designs.

Fine lines between faith and doubt
Trace tapestry threads
In dark tangles and loosened twine
Then flare into delighted design
As dawn brings another vision.

Fine lines of memories and love
Cross the cracks of life
Sketch names and fading narratives
Entangling generations in loving strife
Bringing meaning and life.

Fine lines inscribed by divinity
In the cup of eternal hand
Traces name and remembers history
Promises “I will not forget you”
Beyond time reclaims each hidden strand.

Fine Lines out of time and place
Fine lines between love and strife
Fine Lines in time and eternity
Fine lines that trace our names,
Our narratives and life.

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“I will not forget you.
See, I have inscribed you on the palm of my hands.”

Isaiah 49:15-16 © NRSV

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On Slaying Educational Dragons

Posted by Jenny on Feb 13, 2013 in Snapshot

Story  Jeanette O’Hagan

Nestled in the curve of the Brisbane River, a sleeping beauty is beginning to wake from its summer slumber. Now quietly somnolent, the almost empty expanses of green manicured lawns,  stately sandstone buildings and car parks will soon be a bursting with white canvas information booths, crowds of excited students and cars of every make and model.

The scene will be replicated downstream of the flood swollen river at the Queensland University of Technology Garden Point Campus huddled between the historic Botanic Gardens and Houses of Parliament, at Griffiths University Nathan campus set amidst Australian bushland to the south and indeed in multiple TAFEs and Universities campuses throughout Brisbane and the far reaches of Queensland.

With the start of orientation programs during February 2013, a new generation of tertiary students will arrive from city suburbs, regional towns and remote rural areas to slay educational dragons and secure a bright future. And like the heroes of old, first year students face many challenges as they negotiate the transition from secondary to tertiary education. Fronting up to University can be a daunting task.

“First year university students have historically faced a wide range of stressors and challenges whilst embracing new direction in their lives. The complexity of these stressors, however, appears to be ballooning as we enter a new millennium,” say Ms Libbie Douglass and Dr Mir Rabiul Islam from the Psychology Department, Charles Sturt University in a 2009 report on the emotional wellbeing of first year students. These stressors can result in increases in rates of depression and anxiety and student drop out.

Former engineering student, Chris travelled from Mt Isa to attend James Cook University in Townsville. In the first few weeks, Chris found the initial lectures boring. “They covered the material we had studied at school.” Thinking he wasn’t learning anything new, he stopped attending lectures and by the time he had realised his mistake, he was too far behind to easily catch up. Not surprisingly, he failed his mid-term exams. The work load had become overwhelming. Quiet and retiring, he had made a few friends in the residential college where he stayed but he struggled with literacy and didn’t know where to go for help. By second semester he had withdrawn from his course.

Studies have consistently shown that as much as one third to one fifth of students defer, transfer their course or drop out of study all together by the end of first year. The First Year Experience in Australian Universities, a 1994-2009 longitudinal study by Richard James, Kerri-Lee Krause and Claire Jennings found that in 2009 23% of students were considering deferring or discontinuing. A 2011 HERDSA study on First Years Transition into University reports, “High numbers (e.g. up to 40% at some institutions) discontinue studies prematurely, often due to the difference between the expectations of university life and the actual experience.”

Mrs Kate Hillenberg who worked for years in TESOL and TAFE says, “I think a lot of students feel that they are in a sink or swim situation. It’s a big learning curve and those who manage to keep it together survive but for some students the challenges cause them to walk away.”

Yet with realistic expectations, hard work and a willingness to ask for help when needed, it doesn’t have to be that way.

The Challenges

New students commonly underestimate the work load and the degree of self-motivated study required at University. The 1994-2009 longitudinal study found that a third of First Years found the study work load was too heavy.

Rosie, a quiet, softly spoken pharmacy student at University of Queensland, St Lucia, says, “I was not quite as prepared as I thought for the increased workload.”

In today’s financially tight educational climate, students can have unrealistic expectation of the amount of supervision their lecturers can give.

Kathleen, a science honours graduate, relates how one of her Chemistry lecturers informed the class of nervous first years,

“About a third of you will fail this course and it’s not my problem – your teachers in school cared but I don’t care – it’s all up to you.”

Many lecturers, such as lslam and Douglass, do care. Nevertheless there is a significant change in student-teacher dynamics between secondary school and tertiary education. The 1994-2009 longitudinal study found that lecturers were troubled by the widespread expectations that they would regularly look at student’s draft essays and would mark essays within a week. These things are just not possible with the way Universities are currently funded.

Smaller or more specialist tertiary institutions can provide more opportunity for teacher-student interaction.

Morgan (21) is a vibrant and talented singer, now in her final year of the Bachelor of Music (Classical Voice) at the Griffith Queensland Conservatorium of Music. “I really love my lecturers – they’re incredibly knowledgeable about their subject areas and are a constant source of inspiration. That said, I’m at a very close-knit uni, with much fewer students in classes than a normal uni,” she says. While she didn’t warm to the competitive push of one mentor, she says “my current teacher is a real pillar of strength for me.”

On a positive note, the findings of the 1994-2009 longitudinal study “suggest that good progress has been made in improving the transition to university and the quality of the educational experience for first year students. The investment in high quality transition programs and in monitoring and responding to the needs and experiences of first year students is yielding dividends.” “Half the school-leavers now say that school was a good preparation for university study. This is significantly above the 2004 findings.”

Students may struggle with motivation, procrastination and poor study habits, especially if there is a mismatch between the course and the student’s interests and natural abilities. According to the longitudinal study, 36% find it difficult to get motivated to study.

Caitlin (19), in her final year of Diploma of Justice Studies at South Brisbane Institute of Technology (SBIT) says, “I find it very hard to concentrate and get motivated and get my work done.”

Another challenge can be balancing work, social and family commitments. With rising costs and less government contributions, many students experience financial pressures.

More than half of students have some part-time work to help finance their time at university. While work can enhance studies, it can more often be detrimental to them. According to the 1994-2009 longitudinal study, 61% of students are working. The study concludes, “Longer hours of work are associated with a lower grade average and an increased likelihood of considering deferral … The high number of hours worked each week by a large proportion of first year students, often to provide for basic necessities, suggests educational outcomes are at risk of being diminished.” “The typical full-time student is also a working student who is sandwiching study and work”

Not having work may put other pressures on students with minimal incomes. The Longitudinal study reported that 33% of students found that money worries made it difficult to study.

SBIT student Caitlin said, “Another problem is the lack of funds. Not many people are willing to hire a full time student, and being jobless while studying is harsh.”

Many students experience isolation and loneliness, especially if they have had to relocate to study.

James, Krause and Jennings report an a decrease in sense of community and involvement in extracurricular activities related to an increase of online content of courses, less teacher involvement, bigger classes and increase in the need to work to support one’s studies. “Only one half of first year students report they feel like they belong on their university campus, despite the vast majority of respondents being full-time, campus-based students.”

Second year Pharmacy student Rosie (18), who lives with her family in the northern suburbs, says, “Possibly the greatest challenge for me was switching from an environment where I was familiar with everyone around me, to one where I didn’t know anyone at all.”

For 21 year old Morgan, enrolling in the Conservatorium of Music situated at Brisbane’s Southbank “meant moving away from everyone I knew in Mackay, where I grew up. For me, that was daunting, because I’m quite a social person. But that turned out to be just fine.”

For other students the social side of University or TAFE can dominate. They may be away from parental supervision for the first time. This can result in risky behaviours with drug/alcohol use and abuse and unpleasant sexual experiences.

Former TAFE lecturer, TESOL teacher Hillenberg says students “may use alcohol or drugs to relieve feelings of loneliness, anxiety and depression.” Some, she adds, become involved in the “drinking culture.”

Douglass and Islam in their survey of 181 students at an Australian regional university found ‘30% “experiencing drugs on campus,” 27% “taking illicit drugs” and 24% “smoking marijuana.” Twenty five percent had problems “controlling their alcohol intake” and 10% reported having an “extremely negative sexual experience.”’

The variety of stresses can be greater for rural and remote students who often have to relocate bringing additional burdens of financial pressure and isolation.

In a 2010 study of 32 students at regional University by Vicki Bitsika, Christopher F. Sharpley and Vira Rubenstein, students found “dislocation, to family, friend and partner relationships most stressful.” In a study of rural and remote students attending Swinburne University of Technology, Ms Meaghan Walsh, Ms Jennifer Crawford & Dr Ian Macdonald, students reported “social issues associated with dislocation from family and established social networks … and accommodation issues” as well as financial pressures and academic difficulties.”

Students from rural, minority or lower socioeconomic backgrounds may also be the first one in their families enrolled in tertiary studies. In many cases, their families may not value tertiary education or not fully understand the level of commitment such study entails.

The 1994-2009 Longitudinal Study found “Students from rural areas and low socioeconomic backgrounds are less inclined to say that their final year was a good preparation for university. Students from low socioeconomic backgrounds feel significant pressure from the financial commitment their parents have made, while at the same time are less likely to believe their parents have an understanding of what university is all about.” Nola Alloway and Meaghan Dalley in a study of rural students says “the value of education is not necessarily obvious to many rural people. … young people report that  they have no relevant role models in their communities who would empathise with the importance, benefits and values of education and learning – and no voice that would or could challenge family traditions and understanding.”

International students face the added pressure of adjusting to a foreign culture.

Hillenberg, who still maintains links with her former international students says, “Students from other countries may be dealing with language issues and cultural challenges. However in my experience a lot of overseas students form firm networks of friends in a similar situation and provide support for each other.”

For some students the academic, financial or social pressures become more than they can handle. They may struggle with anxiety or depression or, like Chris, drop out of study. Islam and Douglass state in their 2007 Roundtable discussion paper, “A number of studies suggest that higher rates of psychological morbidity [than among the general population] are being recorded among first year university students throughout the world.” “Many of these issues are extremely serious in nature, such as mental health problems, sexual assault and drug and alcohol crises.”

“Predisposition to depression, anxiety or character challenges such as perfectionism can manifest due to the increasing challenges that the students face. One student I know was diagnosed with Obsessive Compulsive Disorder during his university studies but he continued to attempt to complete his course,” says Hillenberg.

Overcoming the challenges

Despite the difficulties, the majority of students survive and indeed thrive in the transition from secondary school to tertiary studies. There are many strategies and resources available to students to overcome the challenges they face.

Universities and TAFEs are becoming more aware of the issues though there is still more that could be done.

James, Krause and Jennings suggest “strengthening the interactions between students and academic staff. … The student-teaching interaction appears impersonal and distant for many students. … [while] teacher empathy, demonstrated interest in students as individuals and respect for students are important factors in students’ academic and social engagement.”

The large 2011 HERDSA study found that Universities can assist student transition through providing “orientation, web-based course assistance, computer and study facilities, and university sponsored social events.” It concludes, “The research suggests that the university should focus on developing its web-based resources further, these being highly valued by students making the transition to higher education.”

“The TAFE and the University of Queensland have quite extensive student counselling and support available,” says Hillenberg. “These services are open to all students and can involve help with study skills or personal issues including accommodation. … Other general support services like Lifeline, Beyond Blue and Headspace can be accessed by students and need to be promoted so students know these services are available.”

Research shows that support of family and friends is an important factor in helping school leavers adjust to tertiary study.

Even though hundreds of kilometres from home, Morgan says, “My mother was a huge support system for me, re-coaching me in the holidays and monitoring my progress (she was my previous singing teacher before moving to the Conservatorium).”

For Rosie the support of her pre-Uni friends helped: “One thing that helped me keep confident in an unfamiliar environment was catching up with friends I had known from school. It allowed me to keep a connection to the familiar which made dealing with the unfamiliar less stressful.” It was similar for Caitlin: “I got a lot of help from friends and my boyfriend. Without them I would have been a lot more stressed I think.”

Hillenberg suggests families can “actively prepare students for the university environment and talk over the experiences that may be involved.” She adds, “I would suggest that family and friends stay in touch with the students and pay attention to the mood and demeanour of the students over time.”

Students can do a number of things to survive and indeed enhance their tertiary experience.

The 2011 HERDSA study concluded students can help their transition into tertiary study through a “willingness to seek academic support, effort and commitment towards study and embracing university culture.” They say, “Students adapt better to their university environment when they feel supported by their peers and when they are part of a social network and overall culture.”

Hillenberg agrees that “firm friendships can be made with other classmates and these can encourage each other as they are all in the same boat. …There are a variety of social groups on campus which give students an opportunity to reach out. However the onus is on the student to seek out and find these groups.”

Professor Marcia Devlin of Deakin University dropped from full time to part time study in her first year yet went on to earn five academic qualifications. In an article in the Age, she recommends six strategies for first year students:

1) Manage your expectations;

2) Find help early and often;

3) Connect with other students;

4) Minimize part-time work;

5) Be prepared for the crunch time often about the week six of the first semester; and

6) If the crunch comes, consider all options.

Devlin says “Dropping out is an option, of course. It solves your immediate problems. But there are other options. If you need support while you consider your options, talk to your family and friends or make an appointment to speak to a student counsellor.”

An Exciting Time

Despite the potential difficulties, for the majority of students, tertiary study is an exciting time that opens the doors to opportunities and growth.

Morgan (21), in her final year of music studies: “I love the independence of it. I enjoy being able to complete what I need to complete and choose what I want to do in my own time, when it suits me, which can sometimes be a bit of juggle with work.”

Rosie (18), in second year of pharmacy: “so far I am satisfied with my course. While difficult, I find it interesting … while there is more work involved, there is still a much more evident feeling of being relaxed compared to school life.”

Bachelor of Science Graduate, John (28) liked “The freedom to express opinions, discover yourself and others, be yourself, learn, lots of spare time, lots of activities to consider involvement in.” He says, “My experience as a university student was mostly positive. I grew a lot emotionally, spiritually and physically (a little bit, not too much physically). Got involved in a Christian group and that helped me a lot, especially in terms of finding life’s purpose.”

Caitlin (19): “I enjoy my course, and it has taught me a lot.” “It is a lot of fun and I have met so many new people. It has made me come out of my shell a bit, and grow up quite a lot.” “I think it was a big shock for me, studying justice. I studied law and crimes and it hit me hard. I think it finally impacted me how harsh the world can be. I really hit a low for a while, and wondered why I was doing it, but I think I’ve finally started to figure out that yes, it does happen, but that’s why I decided to study this… to help people and to try to prevent it in the future.”

Confronting tertiary studies for the first time can be daunting. Students often experience stress related to the changed study styles and expectations, adjusting to a new environment, making new friends, balancing study with social life, family and work commitments, and financial pressures. It can also be a time of greater independence and personal growth.

The Uni/TAFE experience is an exciting one that opens the doors to opportunity as thorny obstacles and entangling distractions are overcome and the sleeping beauty awakes. Just remember, be prepared, plan ahead, work hard, make connections, seek help early and whenever necessary and don’t despair•

People, programs or groups to contact that can help:

Utilize transition programs – orientation week activities, introductory sessions, study skills workshops etc

University handbooks and information manuals

Fellow students, family and friends

Lecturers, course co-ordinators and advisors

University counselling centres and chaplaincy services

Local doctors, counsellors or psychologists

Headspace

Lifeline

Beyond Blue

Red Frogs

Student groups and societies such as Student Life, AFES, different clubs and societies

References

Alloway, N., & Dalley, L., (2009) “High and Dry” in Rural Australia: obstacles to student aspirations and expectations” in Journal of Research Into Rural Social Issues Vol 19 N 1 April 2009, p 45-55

Aston, J. & Elliot, R. (2007), “Study, Work, Rest and Play: Juggling priorities of student’s lives” in AJEC Australian Journal of Early Childhood, Vol 32 No 2 June 2007, 15 ff

Bowles, A. Et al (2011). An Exploratory Investigation into First Year Student Transition to University. In Krause, K., Buckridge, M., Grimmer, C. and Purbrick-Illek, S. (Eds.) Research and Development in Higher Education: Reshaping Higher Education, 34 (pp. 61 – 71). 34th HERDSA Annual International Conference, Gold Coast, Australia, 4 – 7 July 2011.

Bitsika, V., Sharpley C. F., & Rubenstein, V., (2010) “What Stresses University Students: An Interview Investigation of the Demands of Tertiary Students” in Australian Journal of Guidance and Counselling, Vol 20 No 1 July 2010, pp 41-54, http://www.herdsa.org.au/wp-content/uploads/conference/2011/papers/HERDSA_2011_Bowles.PDF, acc 2 February 2013

Devlin, M., (January 16, 2012) First year: a survival guide in The Age, http://www.theage.com.au/national/tertiary-education/first-year-a-survival-guide-20120116-1q267.html#ixzz2JbgtCMk9 , acc 20 January 2013

Douglass, L., & Islam, M. R. (2009) Emotional wellbeing of first year university students: Critical for determining future academic success. School Social Sciences & Liberal Studies – Charles Sturt University, pdf, http://fyhe.com.au/past_papers/papers09/content/pdf/8A.pdf, acc 20 Jan 2013

Islam, M. R. & Douglass, L., (2007) Emotional wellbeing of first year students: The challenge of engaging the “whole person” Roundtable Discussion Paper, Psychology Department of Charles Sturt University, http://fyhe.com.au/past_papers/2006/Round%20Table/Islam.pdf , acc 20 Jan 2013

James, R., Krause, K-L., & Jennings, C., (2010) The First Year Experience in Australian Universities: Findings from 1994 to 2009,The University of Melbourne, March 2010, pdf, http://www.latrobe.edu.au/ctlc/assets/downloads/dfl/FYE-Report-1994-2009.pdf , acc 20 January 2013

Lewis, C., Dickson-Swift, V., Talbot, L., & Snow, P. (2007) “Regional Tertiary Students and Living Away from Home: A priceless experience that costs too much?” in AJSI Australian Journal of Social Issues, Vol 42 No 42 Summer 2007, pp 531ff.

Walsh, M., Crawford, J., & Macdonald, I., () Rural and Remote Students: Transition Issues in Accessing Tertiary Education, IMAC Education Pty Ltd.,  http://www.imac-education.com.au/publications/Pub12.htm, acc 20 January 2013

Interviews:

Hillenberg, K., (2013) Personal interview conducted 26 January & 2 February, 2013 via email and chat.

Also additional personal interviews with current and past students conducted between 19 January – 2 February, 2013.

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The Next Big Thing – Blog Hop

Posted by Jenny on Jan 2, 2013 in Snippets

The Next Big Thing is a blog chain for writers and artists linking together and talking about their current projects. It gives you, the reader, a chance to discover great writers and their work you may not have heard of before. This year I have been pursuing post-graduate studies in writing and have been inspired to start writing again. I was delighted when Alison Stegert (author of Summer of the Silk Dragon: An American Teen in Beijing) invited me to participate. Thanks Ali! The concept is simple: each creator gets a chance to share a bit about their latest project (new release, completed book or works in progress). The opportunity is paid forward to another blogger or group of bloggers who likewise post about their next best thing in exactly one week’s time (9 January 2013).

Check out Alison’s upcoming book where a young exchange student in China investigates a scam and gets more than she bargains for.  http://oneyearinink.wordpress.com/2012/12/26/the-next-big-thing/

My Next Best Thing:

1. What is the working title of your next book?

Akrad’s Children

2. Where did the idea come from for the book?

Akrad’s Children is a prequel of my first (unpublished) manuscript Adelphi – so the ideas really came as I explored the back story for my characters of Adelphi. The characters took on a life of their own and insisted that their stories be told too. Eventually a storyline began to unfold that develops over 100 years and several books.

3. What genre does your book fall under?

It is YA or New Adult fantasy with the stories entirely set in another world, Nardva.

4. What actors would you choose to play the part of your characters in a movie rendition?

It’s a bit hard to say but maybe Aaron Tveit (Les Mis) or Ethan Hawk or Jeremy Sumpter (though his nose is too straight) for Mannok, a teen version of Gwyneth Paltrow for Ista and perhaps Chen Chang or Dev Patel (Slum Dog Millionaire) for Dinnis.

5. What is the one-sentence synopsis of your book?

“Three young lives are bound together in friendship, love, rivalry and tragedy: two orphaned refugees seeking a new life, a privileged prince striving to earn the approval of his father.”

6. Will your book be self-published or represented by an agency?

At this stage I am pursuing publishing through the traditional route. I submitted Adelphi in the recent HarperVoyager publication window and will try pitching Akrad’s Children to various publishers.

7. How long did it take you to write the first draft of the manuscript?

I started writing the first chapters of Akrad’s Children in August/September this year but really got the bulk of it done in November as part of the NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month) challenge, writing over 50820 words. I have 4-5 chapters left to finish and then will continue writing the sequel Rasel’s Song.

8. What other books would you compare this story to within your genre?

Akrad’s Children and the other books in the series has similarities to Ursuala Le Guin’s Earthsea Trilogy, Anne McCaffrey’s Dragon of Pern series. It includes some adventure and romance and also focuses on the character development in a developed imaginative world.

9. Who or what inspired you to write this book?

I was seven when my parents began reading the Narnia series to me and my brothers. Shortly after this time I spent much of my time daydreaming about my own imagined world with characters and events of what would eventually become the world of Nardva. A vivid dream with the image of a young girl holding a lantern beside a fountain at night inspired the story of Jared and Elene in Adelphi and as I explored their story, other connected stories began take on a life of their own. Eventually this new place, the Five Lands, became part of the wider world of Nardva. I began writing Jared and Elene’s story in Adelphi and then felt the need to tell the earlier stories of Rasel, Dinnis, Ista and Mannok which became Akrad’s Children and Rasel’s Song.

10. What else about the book might pique the reader’s interest?

Each book has a story which stands on its own as the protagonists have both external and internal conflicts to resolve. Yet each one will contribute to a larger story that spans across at least a century – the young sorcerer Akrad’s ejection from the Isle of the Valdane and his arrival in the Five Lands, the impact he has on the lands of Tamra and Silisea and what happens to his legacy after his death. The stories contain romance, adventure, humour, suspense and mystery in a complex world with two moons, strange and ordinary beings, creatures and environments. I enjoy the characters – their vitality and quirky senses of humour – and their stories and I certainly hope you, the reader, will too.

For me 2012 has had two major highlights. At the beginning of the year I enrolled in a post-graduate writing course at Swinburne University and have linked up with some fellow aspiring writers. Towards the end of the year in October I participated in the Word Writers Camp on the Sunshine Coast, Queensland and have met so many aspiring and successful writers. It has been wonderful to meet such lovely, welcoming, creative people and it gives me great pleasure to link you to their Next Big Thing (uploaded next week on 9 Jan 2013):

Paula Vince has eight published works including two which have won awards and one, Greenfield Legacy, written in conjunction with three other Australian writers. She is preparing her ninth book Along for the Ride for publication mid 2013. While her preferred genre is Romance Adventure, I recently enjoyed reading the first book of Paula’s YA fantasy trilogy – the Quenarden series – and can’t wait to read the second one. Check out Paula at www.justoccurred.blogspot.com

Lynne Stringer is soon to publish her first YA Sci-Fi Romance novel The Heir and has two or three other books in the pipeline. Check out Lynne at  https://www.facebook.com/lynnestringer.author?fref=ts

Skye Wieland has recently published Sarah’s Gift – an Adult Christian Romance set in Australia and South Africa and the first of her Dare to Follow Series. Check out Skye at  www.skyewieland-author.blogspot.com)

Kayleen West is an illustrator and writer of children’s books. She has recently published Adoptive Father and has several other children’s books in the pipeline. Her illustrations are truly delightful. Check out Kayleen at http://kayleenwest.blogspot.com.au/

Jenny

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The Winds of Time

Posted by Jenny on Nov 9, 2012 in Snippets

Winds of Time

I wrote this song last weekend as a tribute to my Dad, who I love very much. It was inspired by his current journey in the shadow lands of Alzheimer’s. When I was a child he was my hero and I will always appreciate the way he encouraged me to think and dream. I have a great respect for his integrity, his intelligence, his faith, his vision, his willingness to love and serve God, his compassion for the outsider and his intolerance of injustice. He has made a positive difference to the world around him whether that was as an engineer in Mt Isa and Zambia, running the book shop in Mt Isa or partnering with the church in Zambia and Zimbabwe. He has been a significant mover in the planting of three churches in Mt Isa, Zambia and Zimbabwe. As a father he could be strict or focused on goals outside the family, yet he could also be funny, instructive, gentle and affectionate. He had little patience for small talk or frivolities. Material wealth and position means little to him now as then. Over the last ten years, he has discovered the joys of tending the garden, of being still, and has revealed a gentler more social side to his nature. This is for my Dad.

Winds of Time


Chorus

The winds of time flow aslant the land

Bringing rain, stealing soil and sand

As memory erodes and

Love just keeps on growing;

Faith is growing, flowing

The love just keeps on growing.

Verse One

Irish lad sweeps Capetown girl to

Yellow summer grass and grey icy rains.

The north wind blows with oven heat

Or bone gnawing sleet, windows rattle

In a red brick bungalow.

Markets crash, warring nations retreat

Axis powers are admitting defeat

And nine children on

The love is flowing, it just keeps on growing.

Chorus

The winds of time flow aslant the land

Bringing rain, stealing soil and sand

As memory erodes and

Love just keeps on growing;

Faith is growing, flowing

The love just keeps on growing.

Verse Two

Westerly winds hum and whistle

Over rusty soils and rocky falls

Deep beneath the Spinifex bristles

Miners blast with monstrous machines

Extracting glowing ore in airless halls.

Sputnik speaks to Memphis beats

And young love meets ‘tween sacred walls.

Bright hope struggles

And the love is flowing, it appears to be going.

Chorus

The winds of time flow aslant the land

Bringing rain, stealing soil and sand

As memory erodes and

Love just keeps on growing;

Faith is growing, flowing

The love just keeps on growing.

Verse Three

Dry leaves rattle on dormant trees

Waiting for the next season rains.

Flaming sun plunges through the molten sky

Gilding over hot African plains

Sultry winds bring thunderous storms

Dusty moon steps and freedom’s pains.

Ebony friends pile into the waiting wagon

With laughing children

Faith is growing and the love just keeps on flowing.

Bridge

Bitter sweat

The memory erodes

As the winds are blowing, flowing

As the winds are going.

Chorus

The winds of time flow aslant the land

Bringing rain, stealing soil and sand

As memory erodes and

Love just keeps on growing;

Faith is growing, flowing

The love just keeps on growing.

Verse Four

Bush turkeys scratch garden soils

Building mounds beneath Mt Cootha’s coils

Kookaburra laughter and Currawong calls

Across tree lined valleys and urban sprawls

And western winds announce the show

Sea breezes cooling heated cheeks.

Tragedy strikes, towers and terror fall

And life is finding repose

in the borderlands, and love just keeps on growing.

Chorus

The winds of time flow aslant the land

Bringing rain, stealing soil and sand

As memory erodes and

Love just keeps on growing;

Faith is growing, flowing

The love just keeps on growing.

Bridge

Bitter sweat

The memory erodes

As the winds are blowing, flowing

As the winds are going.

Coda

The winds of time flow aslant the land

Bringing rain and stealing soil and sand

As memory erodes and

Love just keeps on growing

As memory erodes

The winds of time are blowing

In the shadow lands

Love just keeps on growing

On the border lands

And the love keeps on growing,

The love is flowing, It’s going,

It keeps on growing, it’s flowing, growing.

© Jeanette O’Hagan 5 November 2012

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Speaking Silence: Ordination of Women in Australia

Posted by Jenny on Mar 10, 2012 in Snapshot

I love waking up to Classic Breakfast each morning.  A couple of mornings ago, (the morning before International Women’s Day), I was abruptly roused (in more ways than one) by the informational byte:

“What could we finally do [on this day in 1992]?  Women were finally admitted to the priesthood in Australia with the ordination of ten women by Dr Peter Carney.”

What the presenter (the delightful Emma Ayres) was referring to was the first ordinations of women by the Anglican Church in Australia.  However, what struck me was the implication that this was the first time women had been ordained in any church in Australia.  I realize that this segment (so often intriguing) gives just snippets in time yet 666 ABC Canberra also proclaimed “20 years of Women’s Ordination in Australia” and “It’s been 20 years since Australia’s first women priests were ordained in a ceremony in Perth”.   I would like to gently point out that there are more churches in Australia than the Anglican Church and other denominations have been ordaining woman for many decades previous to 7 March 1992.

In fact, women have held positions of leadership in the church from its inception in the 1st century. There were prominent women among Jesus’ followers as significant financial supporters, disciples (Luke 8:1-3) and the important first witnesses of his resurrection (John 20:1, 11-18).  Women continued to contribute in the early church: from Phillip’s four prophesying daughters (Acts 21:9), to Priscilla (who, along with her husband instructed the prominent evangelist and apologist Apollo, held a house church in her home and who Paul considered as a fellow worker Romans 16:3-5), to Junias noted among the apostles (Rom 16:7), to Phoebe the deacon (Romans 16:1), to Euodia and Syntyche, Paul’s fellow workers in the gospel (Philippians 4:2-3) and many other women such as Mary, mother of John Mark (Acts 12:12), Lydia of Thyatira (Acts 16:15), Chloe of Corinth (1 Corinthians 1:11), Nympha of Laodicea (Colossians 4:15) and Apphia (Philemon 2) who held house churches in their homes. Other women exercised leadership in first couple of centuries, such as Thelca of Iconium.   Historian Dr. Karen J. Torjesen concludes that up until the third century “Women were evangelizing, baptizing, teaching, interpreting Scripture, doing visitation, functioning as leaders of groups within the church and speaking out in the assembly. The Statutes of the Apostles show that women also shared in the eucharistic ministry.”    However, as the church became more public, organized, stratified and institutionalized, women’s leadership roles came under dispute in 3rd – 5th centuries.

In the increasing restrictions on women’s public participation and leadership in the church over the next millennia or so did not mean that women were no longer involved or even influential in the church’s life and ministry. They continued to make an impact as faithful grandmothers, mothers, sisters and wives, as patrons, and in the spiritual, charitable and educational work of female religious orders, as social and religious reformers, as contributors to the parish life and as intrepid missionaries.  Moreover, throughout church history dynamic new groups have often encouraged women as preachers, ministers and leaders – for instance the Waldensians (12th century), the early Anabaptists (16th century), the Quakers (17th century), the early Moravians (18th century), the early Methodists (18th century), the Salvation Army (19th century), the Holiness movement (19th century) and the early Assemblies of God (20th century: first women ordained in AOG USA in 1914). In the middle 18th century to the middle of the 20th century a number of the more established denominational groups began ordaining women (e.g. branches of the Congregationalists, the Presbyterians, the Wesleyan Methodists, the Nazarenes, the Mennonites, the Baptists, Lutherans etc, particularly in though not confined to the USA). However, the momentum towards women’s ordination slowed and even lost ground in the middle of the 20th century (following the two world wars) – as in fact did the women’s movement as a whole – until it gained new impetus from the 1960s onwards among many denominations worldwide.

What about Australia? Did women indeed have to wait until 1992 for the possibility of ordination?  This depends entirely on which branch of the church you belong to!

  • February 1881, the first woman Salvation Army officer (minister) Mrs Adelaide Sutherland was appointed to Australia (a year after the arrival of the first officer in 1880).  By 1884 32 new officers were commissioned (in all likelihood including women) as the Salvation Army has routinely ordained both married and single women alongside men from its inception by William and Catherine Booth in 1865 in Britain.  (In fact, by 1878 there were nearly an equal number of women officers (41) as there were men officers (49).)

One hundred and five years later, in 1986 Eva Burrows, an Australian woman (born in Newcastle in 1929) was elected as International leader of the Salvation Army. She was second woman to be appointed as General (or the world head).  The first woman elected in this position was Evangeline Booth in 1934.   On 31 January 2011, the Salvation Army announced that Canadian Linda Bond would be the next world leader.

  • 1909 Janet Lancaster founded the very first Pentecostal church in Australia at the Good News Hall which started numerous satellite congregations in Victoria and other parts of Australia during her lifetime.
  • Tuesday 14 June, 1927 Mrs.Winifred Kiek was ordained as a congregational minister in South Australia.
  • 8th October 1951 Rev Dr Hilda Abba was ordained at Pitt Street Congregational Church, Sydney to a Placement in a Theological College.
  • In 1969 Revd Margaret Sanders, was ordained by the Methodist Church of Australia (though ordination of women had been acknowledged in principle since 1929).
  • In October 1972 The Revd M.J. Thalheimer was the first woman ordained in the Presbyterian Church in Australia.
  • In 1973 Pam Bowers and Robin Haskell were ordained in Melbourne as first women ministers in the Churches of Christ in Australia.
  • In 1977 Lynn Holland was the first woman ordained in the Wesleyan Methodist Church of Australia.
  • In 1978 Marita Munro was the first woman ordained as a Baptist minister in Victoria.
  • In 1977 (at the time of Union between Methodist, Presbyterian and Congregationalists), the Uniting Church of Australia had 36 ordained women in ministry.
  • In March 1992, (10) women ordained to the Anglican priesthood for the first time in Australia.  By the end of 1992, 90 women were ordained in the Anglican Church of Australia and 2 others who had been ordained overseas were recognised – “92 in ‘92″

As you can see, the Anglicans were by no means the first church in Australia to ordain women to the ministry (minister/priest/pastor).  It would be more accurate to say that they were one of the last (though they do seem to have made up for lost time).  Whatever the theological and biblical issues might be about ordaining women, there is no denying the woman have had, and continue to have, a prominent, pivotal and influential role in the life and ministry of the church.

Jenny

Relevant Links:

http://www.religioustolerance.org/femclrg13.htm

http://www.australianbiography.gov.au/subjects/burrows/

http://learningtogive.org/papers/paper158.html

http://theflamingheretic.wordpress.com/2011/09/14/women-leadership-in-the-moravian-church/

http://www.gameo.org/encyclopedia/contents/W645ME.html#1989

http://books.google.com.au/books?id=EFI7tr9XK6EC&pg=RA1-PA449&lpg=RA1-PA449&dq=waldensians+early+women+leadership&source=bl&ots=oYeNM5itjP&sig=u6y5Gl8gqzBN2c-37F9MdabOiFE&hl=en&sa=X&ei=CqhWT8b8Lae5iQeJtLjJCA&ved=0CDEQ6AEwAQ#v=onepage&q=waldensians%20early%20women%20leadership&f=false

http://www.anglicanbrisbane.org.au/www/node/513

http://www.salvationarmy.org.au/about-us_65047/history-and-heritage/1880-1900.html?s=1024054748

http://www1.salvationarmy.org/ind/www_ind.nsf/80256e520050a2e280256b3b0048eb4b/80256e520050a2e280256c18005cdb07!OpenDocument

Dr. Roy B. Blizzard, “THE ROLE OF WOMEN in First-Century Judaism and the Church”  http://webbpage.bravehost.com/Yavo/1_4_Bliz_WomensRole.html

Mimi Haddad Women Leaders in the Early Church in Sojourners 16-02-2009  http://sojo.net/blogs/2009/02/16/women-leaders-early-church

Jone Johnson Lewis, “Abbesses in Women’s Religious History” in About.com – Woman’s History  http://womenshistory.about.com/od/medievalchristianity/a/abbess.htm

Rev. Kathryn Riss, “Women in Church History WOMEN PASTORS IN THE EARLY CHURCH” in God’s Word to Women http://godswordtowomen.org/pastors.htm

Dr. Karen J. Torjesen, “Early Controversies Over Female Leadership” Issue 17 in Christian History Magazine http://www.christianhistorymagazine.org/index.php/past-pages/17womens-leadership/

Ruth A Tucker, Daughters of Eve, http://daughtereve.blogspot.com.au/

David Woodbury, Foundation of the Salvation Army in Sydney 1882-83 in Dictionary of Sydney,  2011  http://www.dictionaryofsydney.org/item/56096

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Cry My Beloved Country

Posted by Jenny on Mar 3, 2012 in Snippets

There are times in our lives when we suddenly realize a building we thought sound has been eaten out by termites, the solid ground we are standing on is about to collapse  or that our home  is not as safe haven we imagined it to be. I can still remember my disbelief as a young newly qualified doctor when a  patient -  a big, muscular, tatooed and gruff wharfie – related  stories about police brutality and corruption.  Brought up to respect and to believe in authority I found these stories hard to credit, yet  a couple of years later his tales of betrayal were confirmed in the media.  While a bank may go bankrupt overnight or a cliff collapse in seconds, the white anting or undermining of institutions and structures takes a lot longer than the final, dramatic collapse.  As Casting Crowns sing in Slow Fade, “People never crumble in a day”!    Nor do nations.

The poem Cry My Beloved Country is written in response to the paper, “After-birth abortion: why should the baby live?” by Alberto Giubilini and  Francesca Minerva.   I find their insistence on the moral defensiveness of  terminating the life of a healthy newborn on the basis of an undefined emotional or financial threat to family welfare to be truly horrifying. Even they admit that “it is hard to exactly determine when a subject starts or ceases to be a ‘person’” given their vague functional definition of personhood (limited to those who can attribute value to their own existence).  In my mind this begs the question – where will the line stretch to next time and who will it tag next for involuntary termination? And what sort of society are we where it is less morally objectionable to kill a vulnerable child than an adult.  In true double speak style worthy of Orwell’s Nineteen Eighty Four or the Gilbert and Sullivan’s  The Mikado, Giubilin and Minerva state that we would not have been harmed if our parents had decided to kill us as an unborn or just born child because they would have harmed someone who actually doesn’t exist (a “potential” rather than an “actual” person).   This is not how it seems to the men and women who have in fact surivived their parents attempt kill them in utero.

Yet the genesis of this poem has been also been drawn from a slow attrition  of events and viewpoints over the last several months to years. From Richard Dawkins claiming that religious parents  teaching their children about God is the equivalent of child abuse in The God Delusion and that it is not necessary to engage in dialogue with people of faith because by definiton they have proved themselves to be stupid (BBC The Four Horseman); to hear of similar views aggressively paroted to a friend by her family; to pondering the profit motivated media push of unrealistic canons of beauty on our children at younger and younger ages;  to the scapegoating of asylum seekers; to the furor that has surrounded recent public figures like Melissa Tankard Reist,  whose considerable research was recently dismissed out of hand by the simple strategem of  supposedly “outing” her as a “fundamentalist” Christain and for this to be labelled as character assanination!

On Friday morning, as I visualised the prospect of healthy babies put down like unwanted puppies, I could only weep.  This poem is an outporuing of those tears.

—-
Cry My Beloved Country

Cry my beloved country.
Cry as the hoary walls slide into the foaming Sea.
The corrosive waves of doubt and anger eat away
at the base of the white cliffs along the shoreline.
Day after day the foundations are weakened.
The foam of scepticism floats in the whipping wind;
The tainted salt rusts the walls
and encrusts the stained glass windows.

“We must be understanding, We must be tolerant,
We are not like the ancients.
We are rational, urbane, superior.
We do not persecute or start religious wars.
We are not small minded.
We do not cramp other people’s freedom.
Don’t worry, the building is solid
and only a bright future for our country can we see.”

Cry my beloved country
Cry for the innocent that are slaughtered
and caste into the forgotten sea.
Cry as lives are broken to fuel the fires of mammon,
As the earth is stripped, and nations impoverished,
as fugitives from danger are incarcerated,
and young girls – and boys – starve and expose themselves
in the halls of plenty to conform to a celluloid image.

“We know there is no God.
We are modern not superstitious!
Don’t tell us fairy tales about a God who creates
or of a first century Jew who rose from the dead.
We know the source of all evil –
It is faith, blind faith in the ridiculous.
We are the creators of our own image and meaning.
And what a Brave New World our country will be.”

Cry my beloved country
Cry as life is cheapened and the lives of the unwanted –
the too old, too sick, too inconvenient –
are swept away by the raging sea.
Cry as the cries of the coerced, the broken and the sorrowing
are smothered in censorship and outrage.
And the definitions of unworthy and not human are stretched
to eventually engulf you and me.

“We will not listen to your shrill crying.
We are the champions of free speech (that is plain to see)
And you have no right to speak here.
Go back to your little, cramped ghettos!
Get out of the public sphere!
We believe it is the right of every child to choose what they believe;
that is why your views must be silenced.
Then what a Bright new country ours will be.”

Cry my beloved country.
Cry in bitterness and sorrow for a turning of the soul.
Cry that human value and dignity,
Imaged in the love and power of the Creator
may no longer be sold for a blood red lentil stew of licence.
Cry that the stony hearts may be transplanted,
the foundations restored and the windows gleam bright in the sunlight.
May our country be a haven for the weak and broken hearted,
A light house of agape love then would it be.

Jeanette O’Hagan
Friday, 2 March 2012

References:

Giubilini, A. &  Minerva, F, (23 February 2012), After-birth abortion: why should the baby live? In Journal of Medical Ethics, http://jme.bmj.com/content/early/2012/03/01/medethics-2011-100411.full, acc 2 March 2012

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